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Yukon Cornelius · 01-22-2009, 08:20 PM

OK i would say good job if this is just poetry...

If this is a song you cant be so deep.. ppl have to be able to understand what your talking about. there are to many variables here. Simply put nobody holds conversations like that.

#1 get a recorder so you can say things as they come to you.
#2 Don't try to hard ppl can read that to.
#3 don't write to impress write from feeling.

01-22-2009, 08:20 PM	#73 (permalink)
Yukon Cornelius Music Addict Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Texas Posts: 625	OK i would say good job if this is just poetry... If this is a song you cant be so deep.. ppl have to be able to understand what your talking about. there are to many variables here. Simply put nobody holds conversations like that. #1 get a recorder so you can say things as they come to you. #2 Don't try to hard ppl can read that to. #3 don't write to impress write from feeling. __________________ Attempting to find a cure for Stupid...