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Old 01-13-2009, 07:28 PM   #60 (permalink)
SGT .JAR
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Originally Posted by mr dave View Post
maybe try something like this instead

It's you, to whom I become true
It's you, that makes me new
It's you, and only you
Making me someone for you

it's not that great but it's not as broken.
there you go. (notice how i left a little part out)
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