Originally Posted by mr dave

if you're not concerned with the proper use of a language within a song then why use it? especially if, as you say, you don't even know what you're saying.

a song doesn't 'need' to make sense, but there's a difference between a song that is written to be vague and a song that doesn't make sense because it mangles a language. sorry, no offense intended, but...



kind of hurts to read... maybe try something like this instead

It's you, to whom I become true
It's you, that makes me new
It's you, and only you
Making me someone for you

it's not that great but it's not as broken.