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Originally Posted by Killertu
Well what am really meaning is the song is not support with correct past or present tense or other stuff like that,it just needed to sound good....I don't even know what am saying here but u get it???....any one can explain for me  ??? |
if you're not concerned with the proper use of a language within a song then why use it? especially if, as you say, you don't even know what you're saying.
a song doesn't 'need' to make sense, but there's a difference between a song that is written to be vague and a song that doesn't make sense because it mangles a language. sorry, no offense intended, but...
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It you,to who I come true
It you,that make me the who
It you,and only you
To make me,someone for you
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kind of hurts to read... maybe try something like this instead
It's you, to whom I become true
It's you, that makes me new
It's you, and only you
Making me someone for you
it's not that great but it's not as broken.