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~~Fyrenza~~ · 10-11-2008, 01:38 PM

i think you're right paper

in walked a man who held life in his hands

(a diff line) he'd travelled a bit throughout the lands

in walked a man who held life in his hands

(a diff line from the diff line, that rhymes) and he sucked it down like bogs of quicksands

i suck as a poet
but you get the idea

damns
lands
mans (?)
sands
stands

10-11-2008, 01:38 PM	#7 (permalink)
~~Fyrenza~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: high above the Republic of Texas Posts: 216	i think you're right paper in walked a man who held life in his hands (a diff line) he'd travelled a bit throughout the lands in walked a man who held life in his hands (a diff line from the diff line, that rhymes) and he sucked it down like bogs of quicksands i suck as a poet but you get the idea damns lands mans (?) sands stands