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mr. goth glam · 03-26-2008, 07:50 PM

I don't have a problem with what you've got there myself...but I do think a little more to a point might be a little more effective.

I think a nice dose of wry humor is great, but I also believe it's possible to compact what you've got into something just a little more concise.

But again, what's here is still pretty good.

03-26-2008, 07:50 PM	#4 (permalink)
mr. goth glam Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Waverly, VA. Posts: 406	I don't have a problem with what you've got there myself...but I do think a little more to a point might be a little more effective. I think a nice dose of wry humor is great, but I also believe it's possible to compact what you've got into something just a little more concise. But again, what's here is still pretty good. __________________