ahhh i know what you mean. and actually i have never heard this from anyone. I appreciate this a lot because if i were to look through the poetry i've done, i would notice the smae thing you're talking about right now. I try to get the point across as best as possible. Sad but true, i dislike this piece i wrote now that i look into it. It's not your fault that i dislike it, i just see a lot of whining in it. But ill get going on my next piece and hopefully ill see more fit to like it. Thanks
