Well yeah, it's good that it's your own style, but it is an extremely overused style. There's nothing wrong with expressing angst or anger or anything associated with those feelings, but you don't want it to where people can say, "it's the same old crap all over again." It's just a subject that generally gives everyone a wrong opinion right from the start. I guess what I'm trying to get across is, people will generally get the impression that you're whining about something. Angst, when properly expressed, is good. But it can also be a terrible turn off, if all you do is complain through an entire poem or song. I'm not just saying this because of this piece either, it's something that I dislike with alot of bands that I actually enjoy listening to. Repeatedly writing about a particular area of emotion, is just not going to get good results.
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Originally Posted by RezZ
I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.
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