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Old 12-08-2007, 01:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
Dizzys in the wolf
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Its a cool lyric, but theres nothing really special or not special, you need to get some punchlines in to it if you know what I mean. And maybe change some of the language like "fun" to something a bit stronger.
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