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Old 07-01-2007, 03:24 PM   #16 (permalink)
Divide and Fall Apart
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Originally Posted by cheriejrfan View Post
I was just hoping to get some feedback. How is it, If it needs work then some suggestions would be nice..
Its a nice poem.....not sure whether it could be turned into a song though! But its a good story, Im not exactly a poetry expert, lol, but it was a good read.
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