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joyboyo53 · 06-26-2007, 02:54 PM

i miss my, baby girl
the one i hold without a care in the world
shes my light, through the night
i miss my, baby girl

she told me six touches a day
will keep the doctor away
i laughed with slight dismay
but she was right (silent beat)

people always tell you love is this and love is that
but a poet couldnt express quite where im at
im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free
i could be your prey for all eternity

i wrote this song just for you
in case you start to feel a little blue
play this track and know that
i love you and i want you back

obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.

06-26-2007, 02:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
joyboyo53 down the rabbit hole Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: the mountain called monkey Posts: 764	six touches a day i miss my, baby girl the one i hold without a care in the world shes my light, through the night i miss my, baby girl she told me six touches a day will keep the doctor away i laughed with slight dismay but she was right (silent beat) people always tell you love is this and love is that but a poet couldnt express quite where im at im caught up in your web and i dont wanna get free i could be your prey for all eternity i wrote this song just for you in case you start to feel a little blue play this track and know that i love you and i want you back obviously you would have to hear the song to understand the how the rythm fits with the lyrics at certain points, but i was just wondering from an outerspective view what it looks like. i know i only have posted 2 songs and both have been semi-love so feel free to insert your generic bashing below. besides that, im working on the other... seems like songs about chicks are just easier to write.