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right-track · 04-08-2007, 10:50 AM

It's not that I think it's bad
It's just that repeated rhyming is... just sad.
Try and mix it up a tad,
Then your lyrics wouldn't drive me mad.

Peace.

04-08-2007, 10:50 AM	#2 (permalink)
right-track Atchin' Akai Join Date: May 2005 Location: Unamerica Posts: 8,769	It's not that I think it's bad It's just that repeated rhyming is... just sad. Try and mix it up a tad, Then your lyrics wouldn't drive me mad. Peace. Last edited by right-track; 04-08-2007 at 11:03 AM.