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Phrase of Purity, Poem of Nudity
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enemyat_thesix
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I'm sorry: I couldn't get past the first stanza.
Minus the sorry part.
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I shed bloody tears in the rain
I was victimized and I’m in pain
These lines were what turned me off. Too cliche.
Oh, and rhyme schemes are overrated.
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