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Old 03-12-2007, 12:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
sleepy jack
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"rain of ignorance"

Change it to shower of ignorance, its a small change but rain of *word here* is overused.

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And you thought it was so damn easy,
And your crying now.
Take out damn in all but the final one. Its more effective that way.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89 View Post
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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