Ummmm this looks like you took crappy songs that korn didn't even want, I mean this is by far the worst song ever and I listen to crap (according to many people here). You can write dark and stuff but the whole death and dieing stuff isn't cutting it try useing all of your emotions to write a song that has some sort of a meaning. Not everyone can relate you try to write lyrics that other people feel like, I doubt that everyone has felt this way.
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