I did this whilst singing it, and the flow does actually work, trust me on that one.
I was going to seperate it all up, but thought it was short enough already without doing that, and it would end up looking a bit messy.
And cheers, I thought 'appetiser' looked strange.
EDIT: Oh and maybe I'll improve on this later on sometime... and I'll have a look at some of your work in a bit.
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