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Originally Posted by Stu
it needs a lot of work, im a fan of very short poems but this doesnt make the cut for me. your not the worst i've seen though 
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I still stand by what i say!
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Let them live in the stillness and know the flame. They will loose all and give all..
Boys are like lava lamps: fun to look at but not so bright
Coffee, chocolate and men, some things are just better rich
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