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swim · 02-02-2007, 08:55 PM

^you've gone a long way though.

I hate broad statements with nothing behind them in poems. That's what's wrong with this. It's a bunch of broad ideas. There's nothing personal or unique or about it.

02-02-2007, 08:55 PM	#9 (permalink)
swim dontcareaboutyou Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina Posts: 5,145	^you've gone a long way though. I hate broad statements with nothing behind them in poems. That's what's wrong with this. It's a bunch of broad ideas. There's nothing personal or unique or about it. __________________ http://nakednaps.bandcamp.com/