Alot of these lines are cliche, others are pretty good.
"I begin to cry the tears that they should've saw
The tears that would show them how much it hurts"
That was just awful, change it.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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