While its cliche it reminds me of something written by Converge, which is good. Get rid of the whole last part though, its not good.
Your avatar pwnz.
Stick around, i'll write a better critique when i'm feeling better.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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