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swim · 12-10-2006, 07:40 PM

words that wither in the wind sounds kind of cheesy. I'd change wither or take out in the wind. Just me. Other than that it's pretty good.

12-10-2006, 07:40 PM	#2 (permalink)
swim dontcareaboutyou Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina Posts: 5,145	words that wither in the wind sounds kind of cheesy. I'd change wither or take out in the wind. Just me. Other than that it's pretty good. __________________ http://nakednaps.bandcamp.com/