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The Dave · 10-31-2006, 07:33 AM

What you have is good, paints a really good mental picture but it seems like there's more to it then what you posted, like there could be at least a couple more versus to make the story come full circle.

10-31-2006, 07:33 AM	#2 (permalink)
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,830	What you have is good, paints a really good mental picture but it seems like there's more to it then what you posted, like there could be at least a couple more versus to make the story come full circle.