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Old 10-19-2006, 09:05 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Lorry = Truck.

EDIT: I really see what you mean about the chorus. The style of the verse and chorus don't fit together at all. Think I'll scrap this one generally because I'm finding its plinky-plonky style a bit offensive to my own experience! (I have offended myself...)
I wouldn't scrap the verses all together (just the chorus), you could definately use/improve them.
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