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The Sun Glows In My Heart
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Raine
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It feels like you've taken one of my fantasies and put it on paper.
Last stanza is one of the sexiest, romantic things I've ever read.
It sounds ok. (very very extremely ok) but . . I dunno.
I say go for it.
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