Music Banter - View Single Post - Queens, Don't Fall In Love (Dying Mind Of Royalty)

explosions-in-my-pants · 08-17-2006, 05:37 PM

its different, its interesting.
the title I thought was best out of all of it.

its the better of most thins you've wrote.
Its easy to tell your writing style is slowly maturing.
the song isn't half bad, its ok.

the only thing I really don't like is,
you say queen like a million times in the song/poem.

08-17-2006, 05:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 901	its different, its interesting. the title I thought was best out of all of it. its the better of most thins you've wrote. Its easy to tell your writing style is slowly maturing. the song isn't half bad, its ok. the only thing I really don't like is, you say queen like a million times in the song/poem.