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Originally Posted by Crowquill
"ripped my heart." = way too cliche, same with heart in your hands. Try some different metaphors, stay away from like, all those killing, breaking, tearing, cutting, black heart kind of metaphors you see your typical MTVemo band use.
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yea alright.. back to the drawing borad.
Oh i hope your ready to laugh at the changes.. haha
It was some time ago
when you left me alone;
I got caught in so deep,
you beat my heart with your fist.
Such a lie,
that everyone but you can see.
You were the boy for me,
and I,
got trapped in so deep, beneath your feet.
And I,
won't get over you.
I was such a fool for you,
there's no more room for me.
Finding it hard to remain strong.
Lies of truth only lies to see.
It was some time ago
when you left me alone;
I got caught in so deep,
I wanted to try,
but so it seems you'd rather die.
Underneath all the lies,
lay naked and still,
a pile of papers written ‘me + you'
secret feelings, with torment and pain,
an emo song.. Written with a blood filled pen.
You know there is no use for you,
yet I can't
I can't...
I won't get over you,
cause I love...
Cause I can't
cause fell so deep,
in love with you.