"ripped my heart." = way too cliche, same with heart in your hands. Try some different metaphors, stay away from like, all those killing, breaking, tearing, cutting, black heart kind of metaphors you see your typical MTVemo band use.
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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