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Old 08-10-2006, 05:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
Raine
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Originally Posted by PipersLabyrinthX
^just needed a topic name.

And why lose that line?
it doesn't go with the same topic as the rest of the stanza.
If you so choose to keep it, you might want to put a few lines in between that and the rest of the stanza. By a few I mean 2-3.

Unless you write a line with then syllables or more.
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