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Old 08-09-2006, 11:09 PM   #5 (permalink)
sleepy jack
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I don't like the use of the word glances twice, maybe use stare? Its pretty sweet.
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Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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