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Originally Posted by Juggalo4life88
As for making sense, it does. But it seems like a few of the readers are trying to put to much to this. They want something that is really complex, and in most cases when someone tries to make it that way, it becomes to far out there. It flows, and sticks to a point.
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It makes some sense but there's an awkwardness to it.
And if it has any menaing to it, it's rather vague. I think you have some really good lines in here that would really be suited for individual songs.
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Originally Posted by Juggalo4life88
I know that a few of you will bad mouth anything I do because you don't like me, and that is fine by me, because not all artists put lyrics together to please the masses.
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I've just been mortally wounded. My heart is bleeding. Someone save me
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Originally Posted by Juggalo4life88
It reflects life and that's all there is to it. Anyway thanks to those who like this, to those who don't, all I have to say is that it's your opinion. I guess that you have to know what's behind these lyrics to understand them and for them to take on meaning. But that is one thing many won't learn anyway.
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You posted this wrtech thing because you wanted our opinion.
And the people that said they liked it, look at what they said. There was no critique whatsoever. It's spam.
They gave no reason for why they liked it but you took it as a testament for this song's greatness.
I never once said I didn't like it and I gave you my opinion (which is what you're asking for by posting it in this forum) and I gave you advice on how to make it better.
Well you ungrateful little snot, I hope you never try to make money off of this. I imagine any record label, musician, or producer would laugh in your face and hurt your feelings. But stay on that high horse of yours. And when you fall, I hope your pride absorbs some of the damage.
Not everything is about someone liking you.
And if you truly believed that some people would say we don't like your work because we don't like you, then why post at all?
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Originally Posted by Juggalo4life88
I think the next lyrics I write should be something to just piss off those who are easily angered. It seems like all someone has to do is mention God and the evolutionists and atheists get all upset and their panties ride up their ass. I find it funny to get them irritated. Yeah, I think that's next on the agenda........lol!
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Was you dad an alcoholic or something?
All youe evr do is spew hate and anger. And so much of it is misdirected.
Dude, calm down, relax and grow up.
God this, God that. Your song wasn't even about god.
At some point you reach a level of maturity that makes you successful in the world. I fear you'll never reach that level because you have awful people skills and you're always so intent on bringing out the worst of people or acting like an arse.