I've recorded the song down now Hobo. It'll be up at:
www.myspace.com/imjustsingin
In the next ten minutes or so, provided myspace doesn't go all **** on us again.
I structured the lyrics and removed a section, to make it a better length. I changed a bit of the chorus too, to improve the musical phrasing. Now the lyrics are:
VERSE
It's dangerous where we're at right now
Taking it in turns to start the rows
See I know you so well
Which makes it harder to leave
It's a scary place to be we know
At the end but not letting go
I've got your things
They'll be staying with me
VERSE
All of us huddled round the bar
the tables have gone and it's left a mark
Drown myself here
And you can't say anything
Leave me to die I say with a sigh
That’s all you’re getting, I’m not saying goodbye
Pour my emotions with the ***s and dregs
Down the sink....
CHORUS
Reach out
And touch me tonight
Not there
Yet but you'll be alright
Reach out
And touch me tonight
I’ll wait impatiently
For…
For…
VERSE
Plastic wrapping sugar coated
Think of a love song tonight I've wrote it
Glass in hand
Putting on a show
Freedom fighter, morning rewriter
Object of my desire
Come close
And I won't let you go
CHORUS
Reach out
And touch me tonight
Not there
Yet but you'll be alright
Reach out
And touch me tonight
I’ll wait impatiently
For…
For…