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Old 07-22-2006, 12:09 PM   #4 (permalink)
Raine
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Yes, you can write.
As in you are very capable of typing coherent thoughts in a post.
But all of your songs (this and another) that I've read thus far are very vague. No real emotion whatsoever.
Your second stanza is the best thing this song has going for it.
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