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Originally Posted by Crowquill
I don't like it. The rhyming isn't even complex, its pretty much like, elementary school rhyming. I don't even understand what you're talking about.
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Rhyming doesn't have to be complex but this song is a little shallow zepair
try adding more adverbs and adj.'s to it www.dictionary.com www.thesaurus.com and www.rhymer.com are your friends.
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Can I have a youtube video for a sig? There's a thing that says "Wrap [YOUTUBE] tags around selected text"
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