"Revenge"
Tell me whether it needs work, or if it's good. I've had alot of things to influence my writing on this. It's still in phase one
Revenge
Eyes in the shadows,watching,plotting.
Waiting for their chance to seek their revenge.
Waiting in silence,plotting with skill.
Only they know the reason they'll avenge.
Given their own Judas Kiss,
Betrayed like the Son.
Anger burns in their souls depths,
Waiting for a chance to attack and be done.
Wrong done unto them
as seen only by their eyes.
Now they'll resist their oppressors
and destroy their wicked lies.
Once were innocent, now consumed by rage.
They will deal their wrath
Leaving their once powerful enemy
left with nothing but aftermath.
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