lyrically its good, but im not sure of the feel, in the chorus in particular... it seems a bit... hmmmmm i guess the closest i can get to what im thinking is twangy. It just seems like your sacrificing a bit of lyrical edge for catchiness andsomething which i would never expect from master crowe...EASY RHYMING?!?!
whatever... i think the verses are rediculously good, but i would have to hear the chorus to really understand what your plans were for it
oh and if you got around to criting those atrium songs i would be really appreciative
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