"I'll do up my trousers if you put back your gun, mate."
Mate kind of seems like, out of place there, it kind of disrupts the flow, but this maybe a nationality thing seeing as I rarely hear mate..Other then that, I like it. 7/10
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Originally Posted by METALLICA89
Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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