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Originally Posted by ArmyofMe
You wake me up at ball and chain, lets have our breakfast dear..
Before you touch that chain again you'll have something to hear,
That if only you would, maybe, let light in your eyes,
You could see that this life is passin' you by.
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Lets take this for example.
If it didn't rhyme, lets say like this:
That if only you would, maybe, let light in your mind,
You could see that this life is passin' you by
Now does the rest of the line hold up as well now that the rhyme is gone?