So it's been about a year since I started seriously writing, and I kinda hate to say this, but I'm pretty sure that
The One Where Mondo is Inside of Frownland on page three was the first time that I ever properly spaced out dialogue in a story. Before that, because I really didn't have much experience with writing besides screwing around every now and then, I just sort of clumped everything together in mondo blocky paragraphs.
Also, this is still my favorite thing that I've ever written:
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Originally Posted by Oriphiel
Raising an eyebrow, Countess Norg smiles and nods. Reaching into her purse for her kerchief, so that she might wipe the sweat from her brow, she discovers that the contents of her purse have been muddled in a quagmire of wine. Shrugging, she lifts up her purse and drinks deeply, for to a member of the proud Norg family, purse wine is better than no wine at all.
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