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Old 05-12-2018, 08:16 PM   #692 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Oriphiel View Post
Yup, did it on purpose. Thought it sounded more like the way a teenager would recount something, mixing tenses like that. Wanted her part of the story to be sloppy and goofy.


It doesn't work, man. Not for me. It's actually pretty intensely annoying. Just so you know. I mean, it might have seemed great in your head - hell, maybe it is great and it's just me - but damn it ruined that part of the story for me, cos I'm always aware of doing it myself, and it just, well, it just ...
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