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Old 05-09-2018, 05:17 PM   #666 (permalink)
Oriphiel
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Originally Posted by Trollheart View Post
The Doll/Their Little Guardian

OH **** ME YES! Now we are back on track! ****ing excellent in every way. Love the switching between the first-person narrative and the family/child's view, the story slowly building up within the main story, the big twists and surprises, the characters, the settings, and THE ****ING ENDING!

Absolutely ****ing top class man! 10/10. I'd give it higher if I could.
**** it! 20/10!!
Oh shit, thanks! 20/10 is high praise.

Fun fact: I based it off of a real Japanese doll that my dad bought when I was a kid, complete with the head that would randomly fall off. Used to scare the shit out of me. I actually still have it. Took it with me when I moved out, and never had the heart to get rid of it.
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