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Old 02-06-2018, 05:09 AM   #583 (permalink)
Trollheart
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Originally Posted by rubber soul View Post
I see a little bit of Seventh Seal in your story, Troll. It's good, but I've always looked at vampires as something of a cartoon character (watched too many Count Chocula commercials as a kid, I guess). I would have had him make a deal with the devil. Then again, I have a fixation with devils for some reason. I like the humor in your story. I can't figure out how the vampire is able to read minds though. It doesn't take away from the story. Actually it's something that makes the reader wonder which could be a good or a bad thing.

Anyhow, it's a good read as usual. It's a very good short story. Have you thought about writing an anthology of short stories?
Thanks man, but that's not the end of it. I'll publish the epilogue later today and it will explain everything. Kind of.
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