Not bad, not bad at all. Leaves questions unanswered, but then, so do some of mine. Well written, very descriptive; I see what you mean about the King influence. I could ask a lot of questions, make criticisms but as you pointed out, you were much younger when you wrote this, and were you to rewrite it now I'm sure you'd tighten it up. As it stands though, pretty darn good job.
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