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Originally Posted by Oriphiel
Actually, this part was fine the way it was. Since the heart hasn't actually burst through yet, "bursts" would be incorrect, though "will burst" or "is going to burst" would work. Same reason why the "explode" in the sentence isn't "explodes".
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That's the way I saw it too.
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There are plenty of legit errors, though. Get on dat shit, TH!
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Sorry, I don't make errors. You must be thinking of someone else.
Seriously, can you point them out, as I check my writing all the time before uploading and I'd be interested to see where I went wrong, if I did. Thanks.