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Originally Posted by Plankton
Be kind and post a link to the work when doing a review of said work. It sucks trying to find what the hell you're talking about.
Just an observation.
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Oops... Pretty dumb mistake on my part. I put the links in my previous review now.
For easy reference now that the review is a few pages back, the links are:
https://soundcloud.com/lucem-ferre17...-sick-is-in-me
https://soundcloud.com/lucem-ferre17/nightmares
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Originally Posted by Lucem Ferre
Hey man, thanks for the review. I think my biggest problem personally with my music (other than I can't sing) is just how horribly I articulate what I'm trying to say. My lyrics are very blunt and immature, and even though I can work on finding better ways to express myself, I'm not sure if I can do anything to mature the lyrics until I myself mature. But at the same time I still enjoy musicians that are blunt and immature so maybe it's not that big of an issue.
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Honestly, I think the bluntness works quite well in the first of the two tracks. Subtlety isn't always the answer.