lol Bat
Too clean my man, you need that rough around the edges while sounding like you know what you're doing feel. I could see it working out in a full band but at least one of the other bandmates would have to be a little more interesting than you to carry the song.
Now review one of my songs. Doesn't count if you've already heard it.
https://soundcloud.com/frownland/wol...in-the-mad-dog