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Old 02-27-2017, 01:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Mondo Bungle View Post
First tried horror here but gave it up https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...LmaTaVq2wQ/pub
What do you mean, gave it up? You completed that, and it had me totally engrossed. I actually felt claustrophobic, almost hopeless reading it. Excellent stuff. I probably would have left out the epilogue, and ended with him just coming back to the office, picking up a sheet and continuing his work. But really well written. Well done.
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