no no, im taking all the reviews i can get. good ideas, im working on it.
how about this...
i have a secret place
Somewhere i can go
to just get away
from everything in tow
it helps me calm down
when im having a fit
or stops the tears from flowing
when things arent
...blah
this is my lil sisters poem & shes asking for help, but i dont know what to tell her, any ideas?
orrrr this one...
Im walking home from work
Alone in these cold streets
Suddenly the streetlights turn off
And i hear footsteps lingering behind me
I turn around but no ones in sight
Must of been my imagination
continue on my way
An uncomfortable feeling comes upon me
Unknown arms grab hold of me in a firm grip
They pull me into the shadows never to be seen again
or maybe...
Must of been my imagination
continue on my way
An uncomfortable feeling comes upon me
An unknown creature jumps out of the shadows
After a fit of panic, i figure out its just my puppy
one more...
Remember when you said you'll always be in reach...
how am i to reach you now?
Remember when you said the limit for us is imperishable
as of now, that thought is convicted
I would be more understanding if it were an accident
but you knew the risks and took that chance
Did the thought of our future even cross your mind
when you went with your buddies to do your thing
When we were together you always had something smart to say
so what are you referring now?
Cant quite perceive what you're trying to tell me
you see...i cant hear through your casket
im just going to stop trying for tonight
