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Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer
Maybe your mind will change,
or I'll watch you bleed
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The "maybe" doesn't make any sense. It'd be better if you cut "maybe", but it will still suck.
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Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer
And maybe your eyes will sink,
Before you breathe
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The "maybe" at least makes sense here, but then it's followed by an eyes sinking metaphor. I just see eyeballs sinking in the water. Not only is that a nonsensical metaphor, but I think eyeballs float. Could be wrong. Can anyone confirm this?
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Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer
Maybe your mind will fail,
before you care
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Like, as in senility? So the singer is dating an old woman?
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Originally Posted by WhyBanhammer
And maybe you're just hard to take...
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That's what
she said.