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Old 06-15-2016, 10:17 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by mordwyr View Post
Are "bleed" and "breath" supposed to rhyme? Because they don't.
No they're not.

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Originally Posted by Stephen View Post
Assonance
Agreed, you can really detect it when singing.

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Originally Posted by Janszoon View Post
I see seven lines.
Sorry 4 verse.
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