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Originally Posted by End Of the Innocence
Chorus
Emo Queen
You rule your world
Like a bee
Over a hoard
Cutting wrists
Ending life
Making fists
Creating striffe
Creepy scars all up your arms
Make us forget with all your charms
Stealing razors to let you cut
It must take a lot of gut
Your heart of pain
Makes you insane
Chorus
Violins play all around
But you can not make a sound
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so yeah it's like a teenager's but what i'd change are the following:
"creating striffe" should be replaced
you should change "creppy" with "pretty" cause it's like cooler

and "makes" with "drives"
and the violins part should go..... away